Animatic Feedback

The main problem that seemed to confuse class members was the lack of visable structure. Certain shots are shown twice and it was made clear that this was not a jump cut and actually part of our production.

It was also mentioned that the plot of the film be explored more, as there were quite a lot of 'just movement' scenes. This meant it would be very hard for the audience to understand the plot if nothing was aid or explained.

In a rush to finish the animatic, we hadn't placed any titles anywhere in, and so these will have to be put in for obvious reasons.

We had problems with video capture and upload, so the animatic skips from one spot to the next in certain areas which is unintentional, and will be fixed and uploaded shortly. We were told the idea was 'original', however it's unclear whether this was a positive thing, or something actually wuite cad. We will have to review and re0strcuture the animatic, and sift through some ideas before making the final cut. We need to keep in mind that the story makes sense, and there isn't too much 'fluff' in the opening. In order to portray a proper story in only two minutes, it will need to be fast paced and have a large amount of voiceovers.